Indebted ( A Kingpin Love Affair Vol: 1 ) by J.L. Beck : Review by Juls

Indebted by J.L. Beck
My rating: 4 of 5 stars



*** I Love Story Time was gifted an ARC in exchange for an honest review ***


                          4 Stars!

J.L Beck is really becoming a great Author! I really enjoyed reading her Bittersweet Series. So when I saw that she was writing a book that is totally opposite of what she has already done, I had to sign up for this great opportunity to read the ARC for Indebted!

This was definitely a job well done! I love Mafia stories. I really enjoyed Indebted, and I loved the characters! Alzerro (Zerro) is the king of the mafia, he has no emotion when it comes to doing anything he has to do to take care of his business. He has no remorse for the lives he has taken over the years and never has more than one night with the same girl.

One day Zerro goes to claim a debt that is owed to him from a client that borrowed money from him. When he is there to collect, and the client doesn't have his money, he collects something else in exchange for his debt. When Bree goes home to visit her dad, she never thought she would walk into what she did. In order to save her dad from being killed, she is taken instead.

I loved Bree! I love the way that she held herself when it came to Zerro. Even when she was attracted to him, and struggled with herself thinking she was crazyfor being attracted to him, she never backed down. She always fought against him with ever command he gave. She was a spit fire with an attitude, and her personality was great. I loved the inner dialogue she would have with herself....

"His smirk says asshole, but his body says I can have you if I wanted you. I hated it. I love it. I really wanted to shoot him.

As for Alzerro, what's not to like? I loved him! He is seriously alpha-male that is hot as heck. He is so demanding and it makes me want to be told what to do!! I think he describes himself the best when he says....

"I'm the king, I do. Whatever. The. Fuck. I. Want."

And he does, do whatever the fuck he wants! And I love it! I loved Alzerro and Bree together. Their relationship was awesome. Yes she was there against her will, but as time went on, and she sees the true Alzerro, things started to change. The way they pushed each other's limits was perfect. Bree was what Azzero needed whether he knew it or not . She is able to get through his walls, and bring a sense of peace to him while living the Mafia life. Although at times, peace isn't always what she gives him. She definitely gives just as much as she gets...

"Did I fuck the defiance out of you?" He asks smirking, I rolled my eyes, as I walked back to the bathroom. "No. Did I fuck the bad out of you?" I ask with a cheeky grin before closing the bathroom door.

I Love it! This is a great story, with awesome characters! As for the end???? Well when I saw....

To be continued.....

I was yelling at my kindle....are you SERIOUS??? HaHa. Really??? Let's just say I hope the next book will be coming out soon because with the twist of events that take place, I need it now! I have my own idea's about what is going on but, I need the facts!! !! So, if your looking for a great story with a whole lot of awesomeness that leaves you wanting more, this is it!! Another great Series in the works for J.L Beck!


~Juls


I Love Story Time Ratings:

5+ = ILST FAVORITE!

5 = LOVED, HIGHLY recommend.

4 = REALLY liked, recommend.

3 = GOOD, but needed more.

2 = It was OKAY.

1 = NOT for me.

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